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The Adamite Church Community, location unknown but it is in America.

Filbert Blackwater giving his closing sermon to his flock -"We must remember why our Lord and Creator has made us with separate genders, to lead and to follow; Men! be strong, be masculine and virile. Let not the temptations of shallow effeminacy enter your sober, strong-minded pillar of manhood. Women! please understand that your purpose is but to make safe the hearth and clean the home as it were your own garden of baby-flowers, and do not turn away from them by unclean feminist, female-worshiping, male-hating devils with filthy hearts and satanic-marxist-nihilistic souls. Amen".

The congregation leaving the church, few friends talk

Mr. Beaucamp-"Oh that Pastor Blackwater, he is a man that the good Lord intended all his people to be. Such times we live in; with this liberalism, feminism, statism and single parenthood movement it is enough to sicken my family’s souls in Paradise, well except for my heathen ancestors who never knew God and are now roasting in the black hell of pain"

Mr. Opal-"That is very true Mr. Beaucamp. Especially when the new generation of today has become disobedient and disrespectful. If God wills it, I would gather all the children into my Disciplinarian School of Modest Behavior, and instruct them to obey the lord their god without questioning and without doubts. And I would instruct them with firm but fair discipline with my birching rod and some temperament of strong Religious psychology to beat the devil out of them".

Mrs. Opal-"Oh Mister Opal, my husband and shepherd, every time you sound like a teacher of seriousness with a demanding authority, I could not help put remember our wedding night’ She whispers in his ear ‘Let us commit the marriage act tonight my sweet angelic Fuhrer".

Old Miss Leah and Mrs. Petunia

Miss Leah-"Did you hear when Pastor Blackwater spoke of the vileness of unspeakable fornications in the new generation?"

Mrs. Petunia-"Oh yes dear, it was very appalling and yet it made my heart cry with joy when Pastor Blackwater said that we could change the next generation with our truth of God’s wisdom and grace".

Miss Leah-"Oh, How true Mrs. Petunia. We can do fairly well without this…sex…oh how it makes my soul sinful by saying that pagan word".

Mrs. Petunia-"Quite right my dear, quite right. But I keep forgetting what is exactly sex?"

Miss Leah-"Oh its something the damnable youth use to make abominable noises and laughter and touching each other with their hands and fingers…ohhhh! the mere thought of it makes my soul churn with disfavor of the lord. Anyway, the youth always try to justify it by saying odious things like it is how children are born and that married folk do it in the marriage bed".

Mrs. Petunia-"That is despicably blasphemous and vulgar. Why my husband, lord rest his immortal strong soul, and I never have done such an beastly act. Our Marriage bed was peaceful and pleasant before the Lord our God. Oh dear Miss Leah I pray before God the Maker that he will one day change the hearts of these rebellious adolescents and lead them far away from the devil and his….grotesque s-e-x, fornication. Uh! I need to clean my house and sew while reading Proverbs".

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